Want to write a song?

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    Falcon Sage
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    Not sure if you still want song lyrics and I tried checking out your dropbox link but I couldn’t access it as I didn’t know the credentials and you didn’t seem to have any, I just saw
    “Email:
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    I made a parody of the song Lion by Hollywood Undead, I know this is a song more for my generation but I think it may or may not help in reaching younger men since most teens/almost-adults my age are music nerds. And of course this is going to need some tweaking if anyone wants to take this.

    “I am a lad and I want to be free
    Do you see a lad when you look inside of me
    Outside the window just to ditch you as you sleep
    ‘Cause I am a lad born from genes you cannot have
    How can I sleep at night there’s a whore inside my head
    I found a liar hidden right within my bed
    I will not hide myself from the tears that men have shed
    ‘Cause I am a lad, and you are dead

    Heres a story of everything you’ll ever be
    You can hide but some of us can never un-see
    And when I go I don’t need your little things
    They remind me of all their little dreams
    Can you hear the words, all I can say
    We can watch the world even as we walk away
    Don’t forget about tomorrow, tomorrow is today
    You where born a lad and a lad you will stay

    I am a lad and I want to be free
    Do you see the lad when you look inside of me
    Outside the window just to ditch you as you sleep
    ‘Cause I am a lad born from genes you cannot have

    Remember an army of all those little c~~~s
    Livin’ life cause they only get a little bit
    It’s hard to fight when you’re born at the very end
    I’d rather die then watch men givin’ in
    I’m not sorry daughter, but your fathers not the same
    You can’t look into my eyes and swear you’re not the same
    But tomorrow is tomorrow so forgive me if I say you can hide
    Behind their coverups while I hide from bitch inflicted pain
    After all only so much we can say
    Words will lose their meaning once we walk away
    Can’t promise that you love me, you watch me as I fade
    I gave you all these things these manginas always gave
    The hands on the clock and the things we cannot change
    Tearin’ out the bitches and take back what I made
    If there’s one thing I’d keep, its not you I would save
    ‘Cause I am just a lad and a lad I will stay

    I am a lad and I want to be free
    Do you see the lad when you look inside of me
    Outside the window just to ditch you as you sleep
    ‘Cause I am a lad born from genes you cannot have

    Hey! I know you meant to let go
    All I want and you’re not what I ever wanna know
    Can’t hide in the attic of my pretty home
    Of my pretty home, of my pretty home
    Hey! I know you meant to let go
    All I want and you’re not what I ever wanna know
    Can’t hide in the attic of my pretty home
    Of my pretty home, of my pretty home
    Hey!

    I am a lad and I want to be free
    Do you see the lad when you look inside of me
    Outside the window just to ditch you as you sleep
    ‘Cause I am a lad born from genes you can not have”

    "Woman is a misbegotten man and has a faulty and defective nature in comparison to his. Therefore she is unsure in herself. What she cannot get, she seeks to obtain through lying and diabolical deceptions. And so, to put it briefly, one must be on one's guard with every woman, as if she were a poisonous snake and the horned devil. ... Thus in evil and perverse doings woman is cleverer, that is, slyer, than man. Her feelings drive woman toward every evil, just as reason impels man toward all good." –Saint Albertus Magnus, Dominican theologian, 13th century

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    Anonymous
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    We need to cut some tracs.

    #317478
    Joetech
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    Homer & Jethro did a song once sung to the tune of “Please Help Me I’m Falling”

    Please help me I’m crawlin’
    She’s done it again
    slammed the door on my fingers
    when I tried to get in
    she hauled off & kicked out
    the last tooth I had
    I wish she would quit it
    before I get mad

    Go down to the river
    where the water is nice
    stick your head under three times
    and pull it out twice
    first you wanted to leave me
    then you wanted to stay
    Lord, how can I miss you
    when you won’t go away

    Please help me I’m falling
    for somebody new
    anything I wind up with
    will be better than you
    go have your face lifted
    it needs it no doubt
    Go to Peter Pan’s beauty shop
    before your pan peters out.

    "Don't follow in my footsteps...I stepped in something."

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    Best song from a man to a woman is Bob Dylan’s, ‘It Aint Me’.

    I have been writing my own music, since picking up the guitar, and I have a few. One of my favorite lines of my own songs, “gave her my heart, but she wanted my soul.”

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    Ha! I must be influenced by Bob Dylan. I found several of my songs have similar lyrics. Good thing that I do not get paid for it.

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    I think a comedic song would be pretty good for MGTOW. Something to parody Lady Goo Goo or Nicki Minaj would be hilarious. I’ve been noticing that a lot of this stuff is more and more looking like nothing but crappy porn anyways. “Pop Porn” it could be a new genre for these “artists.” Instead of playing musical instruments they can play the “dildo” and ride the c~~~ carousel round and round.

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    When opening day for dove season comes around each year, I usually get songs/lyrics popping into my head. The opener means a 3 day weekend away from home with just my son(s), hunting buds, or maybe just me alone. This past season the words “I Can’t Wait to be Lonely” kept swimming around my head. It’s a good start or title for a CW song.

    #450290
    Chucks_Revenge
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    I wrote this for my ex. Its sung to the tune of Winter Wonderland…

    She’s got a mouth that’s always flapping
    ’cause the bitch is always yapping
    With nothing nice to say
    She just gripes all day
    I’m f~~~ing T**** S********’s great big mouth

    You say you don’t wanna to hear it
    You don’t even wanna be near it
    But give it a try
    You might find you like
    F~~~ing T**** S********’s great big mouth

    A mouth like that could probably suck a horse c~~~
    And have enough room left for you and me
    And when she’s done she’ll finish off the livestock
    Then hit the zoo and do a chimpanzee

    The rest it tucked away on an old external hard drive somewhere…

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    Qeeqo
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    I will be able to build my new studio in 11 months. No gear at this time.

    I don’t know about protools, logic, or ableton but I know you can lay down tracks remotely in cubase.

    Sounds like fun.

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    Tiga K
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    Wow. Thanks for all the input guys. I’ve been unable to be on the site much due to circumstances (good ones thankfully), so I wasn’t aware this thread was still going on. Because of circumstances, I can’t work on music at the moment, but I’ll keep this in mind. I still keep up with $aver via email and we were working on some music for another track before I had to stop.

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    Rob2015
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    I started my day with the Feminist Anthem “I Am Woman” written by Helen Reddy.

    Decided to subvert and change the lyrics :

    Lyrics

    I am MGTOW, hear me roar
    In numbers too big to ignore
    And I know too much to go back an’ pretend
    ‘Cause I’ve heard it all before
    And I’ve been down there on the floor
    No one’s ever gonna keep me down again

    Oh yes, I am wise
    But it’s wisdom born of pain
    Yes, I’ve paid the price
    But look how much I gained
    If I have to, I can do anything
    I am strong
    (Strong)
    I am invincible
    (Invincible)
    I am MGTOW

    You can bend but never break me
    ‘Cause it only serves to make me
    More determined to achieve my final goal
    And I come back even stronger
    Not a novice any longer
    ‘Cause you’ve deepened the conviction in my soul

    Oh yes, I am wise
    But it’s wisdom born of pain
    Yes, I’ve paid the price
    But look how much I gained
    If I have to, I can do anything
    I am strong
    (Strong)
    I am invincible
    (Invincible)
    I am MGTOW

    I am MGTOW watch me grow
    See me standing toe to toe
    As I spread my lovin’ arms across the land
    But I’m still an embryo
    With a long, long way to go
    Until I make my Brother understand

    Oh yes, I am wise
    But it’s wisdom born of pain
    Yes, I’ve paid the price
    But look how much I gained
    If I have to, I can face anything
    I am strong
    (Strong)
    I am invincible
    (Invincible)
    I am MGTOW

    I am MGTOW
    I am invincible
    I am strong
    I am MGTOW
    I am invincible
    I am strong
    I am MGTOW

    Please let me know what you think !

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