My song not yet on guitar:

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  • #680976
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    Astro
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    2045

    “When all hope in life is going,
    When I stop and wonder why.
    When who knows is more than knowing,
    When I need a place to cry.

    When I weep beyond my tears.
    When my truths are found a lie.
    When my greatest fears are growing,
    When I need a place to die.

    It says no one shall ever be
    what I cannot understand.
    When tears see more than you can see,
    Come and take my hand.

    I can bid my friends farewell,
    we are all just grains of sand.
    When life is a living hell,
    I need a place to land.

    This song has no chorus,
    for I am all alone.
    It tells me what will be,
    we are all just dirt and bones.”

    #680978
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    Blade
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    That was f~~~in good sparky . You got a talent there .

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    #680986
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    Astro
    Astro
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    2045

    That was f~~~in good sparky . You got a talent there .

    I plan to pick it on guitar. This is my forgotten genius as it was condemned by my church, which I left. I have written over 600 songs but have only started to break through the block started in 1996 from my first wife. Songwriting is an emotional damnation. These are the words of a man grasping for hope as he stands on a ledge. I fear these words and is also part of why I blocked it out. Yet good or bad, it is who I am.

    This year, I wrote a song called “Good Enough”. Any simp would think it was about a woman but it was actually about “Jessica”, my Love Doll. I put it on Facebook and the joke is on them. “Place to cry” is more serious.

    #680988
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    Blade
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    about “Jessica”, my Love Doll. I put it on Facebook and the joke is on them. “Place to cry” is more serious.

    F~~~ing crying with laughter . You got me

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    #681003
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    Anonymous
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    You wanna hear my “f~~~-it-all and then-some” song?

    It’s really good!

    #681049
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    Modern Day Warrior
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    Songwriting: Just one of many worthwhile pursuits when you have the freedom to pursue it. Keep writing, brother.

    "One must put up barriers to keep oneself intact." - Neil Peart

    #681095
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    Anonymous
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    Write some Mgtow songs!

    #681565
    K
    Hitman
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    here’s a song for doll lovers..

    hahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    dolls are human dildo’s.

    #681815
    Astro
    Astro
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    2045

    You wanna hear my “f~~~-it-all and then-some” song?
    It’s really good!

    Yes, I would. I respect music.

    #681828
    Astro
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    2045

    Write some Mgtow songs!

    That was a MGTOW song in a way but you have a point. That song was of suicidal desperation, not victory. Until I put it to music, it is only a poem. You guys can inspire me to a topic and when a tune inspires me, it can be a song. I have written more than 600 songs but this will be my second since my writers block in 1996. My music was destroyed by my first wife and the church. I had a 6 and 12 string acoustic and a 1974 hand made Fender Stratocaster with amps, delay, reverb and mixer. All I now have is a 6 and 12 string.

    #681831
    Astro
    Astro
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    2045

    here’s a song for doll lovers

    No thanks and NFG. My Love doll demands far less. She gets what I give and demands nothing. No Pump and Dump MGTOW can do cheaper. After one puts a balloon on their Johnson, it doesn’t feel as good as Jessica.

    #683812
    Astro
    Astro
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    2045

    “Good enough”

    I was alone, had no way home.
    I couldn’t be or not to be.
    Then something happened, don’t know how to say.
    It gave me brightness on my darkest day.

    (Chorus)
    I will always be good enough, she will always be good enough, can’t you see?
    When the pain within had took me in. When death was my final sin, she set me free.
    I can’t explain it all to you but I know what I feel is true. What can I say?
    Yesterday was sorrow but I feel hope for tomorrow, starting today. Yea, I found a way.

    Months of pain, going insane.
    Who gives a damn who is to blame?
    Something happened when I seen my shame.
    No more will I play the game.

    (Chorus)
    My lady is good enough, she will always be good enough, can’t you see?
    I will always be good enough, she will always be good enough… for me.

    What can I say but I have a good sex doll. When I have the money, I plan to get one better.

    #690697
    Blade
    blade
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    You wanna hear my “f~~~-it-all and then-some” song?

    It’s really good!

    Were is the song

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    #690700
    Blade
    blade
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    What can I say but I have a good sex doll. When I have the money, I plan to get one better.

    As long as your happy . You and your doll .

    I can see she is very special to you . Its your dream girl

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