A WINTERS BREATH

[Colin Combover in a ComaParticipant 5068]

Find myself still with the scent of you

A winters breath

Summer always knew it was at it’s death

Wallowing through the wanderings of the past
Following to the future that could never last

You were the glow on the plain
You then became
Winter snow
And heavy rain

The wind thrust
Your tyrannical ways
In those
Maniacal days

Smudged your blossom

When all I wanted
Was to be nudged
In your bosom

The ice could never thaw
My pitiful implore
That became
Something to adore

As the trees in winter shed
My beseech for you
Was imbed

A cold I couldn’t shake

And as the seasons changed
So did you
And left me
In your wake

[Gravel PitParticipant]

NIce and Subtle Colin. MGTOW Approved! Stamped, Sealed, mailed to Publisher. Coffee Mugs getting made my dear boy, you’re headed to Hollywood.

[Colin Combover in a ComaParticipant 5068]

Gravel Pit wrote:

NIce and Subtle Colin. MGTOW Approved! Stamped, Sealed, mailed to Publisher. Coffee Mugs getting made my dear boy, you’re headed to Hollywood.

Is Follywood prepared however for a specimen of my calibre?
Yeah, might come over to the twilight zone, probably get my own chat-show. First guests: Gravel Pitt, Hermit, Mickey, Blade, and special guest: Carnage.

[habilis71Participant 141]

WTF was he doing till “she left”. When the first cold breath hit is face, maybe one warning and retraining…. otherwise out of there, as a mistake had been made looking to her for love, support, kindness, comfort, and soulful relations. His picker was broken when he picked her. She picked him.

your dna dictates your need to approach women.... their dna dictates what they do when you arrive

[Colin Combover in a ComaParticipant 5068]

habilis71 wrote:

WTF was he doing till “she left”. When the first cold breath hit is face, maybe one warning and retraining…. otherwise out of there, as a mistake had been made looking to her for love, support, kindness, comfort, and soulful relations. His picker was broken when he picked her. She picked him.

You tell him matey! What a silly little specimen eh!

[Branched offParticipant 10958]

Colin the practise is paying off. I am not sure about the penultimate stanza -just its comprehensibility- but its good stuff mate. Keep this up and you will be a good poet. You have dropped the incorrectly used grandiose language and the extreme imagery are finding your voice as a poet. And it is a good voice. It doesn’t need any pepping up with long intellectual words or foul imagery, its strongest on its own because you have good things to say and you have natural rhythm. Keep practising and when you are published I will buy a copy of your book, if you will sign it for me.

A woman is like fire -fun to play with, can warm you through and cook your food, needs constant feeding, can burn you and consume all you own

[Gabriel A. KingParticipant 730]

Consider the poem your graduation speech. Well done.

[HermitParticipant]

Colin Combover in a Coma wrote:

Is Follywood prepared however for a specimen of my calibre? Yeah, might come over to the twilight zone, probably get my own chat-show. First guests: Gravel Pitt, Hermit, Mickey, Blade, and special guest: Carnage.

Now that would be some fun for sure. If you did have your own chat show, I’d definitely love to be a guest and possibly even co-host.

The evil in women’s hearts leaves them no moral bounds as to inhibit them from descending to the lowest levels of darkness to acquire their self entitled desires.

[Colin Combover in a ComaParticipant 5068]

Branched off wrote:

Colin the practise is paying off. I am not sure about the penultimate stanza -just its comprehensibility- but its good stuff mate. Keep this up and you will be a good poet. You have dropped the incorrectly used grandiose language and the extreme imagery are finding your voice as a poet. And it is a good voice. It doesn’t need any pepping up with long intellectual words or foul imagery, its strongest on its own because you have good things to say and you have natural rhythm. Keep practising and when you are published I will buy a copy of your book, if you will sign it for me.

Thanks Mr Branch. If I may say myself, I am quite pleased with this one.
Would you buy a copy of most vulgar ones however…..
If I sign it for you, that means our meatsuits would be acquainted with one another
Is your Hippocampus moist enough to decipher a specimen as eminent as I?

[Colin Combover in a ComaParticipant 5068]

Gabriel A. King wrote:

Consider the poem your graduation speech. Well done.<iframe width=”500″ height=”281″ src=”https://www.youtube.com/embed/qIlBeqM0mRE?feature=oembed” frameborder=”0″ allowfullscreen=”” allow=”accelerometer; autoplay; encrypted-media; gyroscope; picture-in-picture”></iframe>

Will do Gabriel.
Keep warning the f~~~ers of Sheol buddy!

[Colin Combover in a ComaParticipant 5068]

Hermit wrote:

Colin Combover in a Coma wrote:

Is Follywood prepared however for a specimen of my calibre? Yeah, might come over to the twilight zone, probably get my own chat-show. First guests: Gravel Pitt, Hermit, Mickey, Blade, and special guest: Carnage.

Now that would be some fun for sure. If you did have your own chat show, I’d definitely love to be a guest and possibly even co-host.

I wouldn’t have you as my tea-boy.

[Colin Combover in a ComaParticipant 5068]

Joking.
Yes, you would be a most welcome sex pest(sorry, guest). However, I already have a co-host, he’s like burnt toast, it’s Mr Watcher!

[HermitParticipant]

Colin Combover in a Coma wrote:

Joking. Yes, you would be a most welcome sex pest(sorry, guest). However, I already have a co-host, he’s like burnt toast, it’s Mr Watcher!

Ok, never mind. I don’t even want to be a guest now, you creepy freak.

The evil in women’s hearts leaves them no moral bounds as to inhibit them from descending to the lowest levels of darkness to acquire their self entitled desires.

[Colin Combover in a ComaParticipant 5068]

Hermit wrote:

Colin Combover in a Coma wrote:

Joking. Yes, you would be a most welcome sex pest(sorry, guest). However, I already have a co-host, he’s like burnt toast, it’s Mr Watcher!

Ok, never mind. I don’t even want to be a guest now, you creepy freak.

Tough titties, you are the first guest.
“Please put your legs together for your first guest folks, The office turd from Kansas, HERM”

[HermitParticipant]

Colin Combover in a Coma wrote:

Hermit wrote:

Colin Combover in a Coma wrote:

Joking. Yes, you would be a most welcome sex pest(sorry, guest). However, I already have a co-host, he’s like burnt toast, it’s Mr Watcher!

Ok, never mind. I don’t even want to be a guest now, you creepy freak.

Tough titties, you are the first guest.“Please put your legs together for your first guest folks, The office turd from Kansas, HERM”

Can you imagine? The show would have to be a hit as it would be like nothing anyone has ever seen before. If I can’t be your co-host, then I should at least be a recurring guest as I know the audience would love me.

The evil in women’s hearts leaves them no moral bounds as to inhibit them from descending to the lowest levels of darkness to acquire their self entitled desires.

[Colin Combover in a ComaParticipant 5068]

Ha ha! Little Herm in his chequered waistcoat, pocket watch, personalised cuffs, rim glasses, handkerchief, suede shoes, and HUGE belly! Ha ha!
Try not to embarrass the other guests will you…..thanks.

[Colin Combover in a ComaParticipant 5068]

Hermit wrote:

Colin Combover in a Coma wrote:

Hermit wrote:

Colin Combover in a Coma wrote:

Joking. Yes, you would be a most welcome sex pest(sorry, guest). However, I already have a co-host, he’s like burnt toast, it’s Mr Watcher!

Ok, never mind. I don’t even want to be a guest now, you creepy freak.

Tough titties, you are the first guest.“Please put your legs together for your first guest folks, The office turd from Kansas, HERM”

Can you imagine? The show would have to be a hit as it would be like nothing anyone has ever seen before. If I can’t be your co-host, then I should at least be a recurring guest as I know the audience would love me.

I tell you now my little friend, America wouldn’t know what to make of me. A specimen beset, whose Hippocampus can’t forget.
We would have a weekly “poem” night, a tumbleweed eating contest, and many more weird and wonderful delights for the masses(or should that be asses) of the twilight zone.

I can’t wait to get the first flight to Alta Vista, Kansas……can you?

[HermitParticipant]

Colin Combover in a Coma wrote:

Ha ha! Little Herm in his chequered waistcoat, pocket watch, personalised cuffs, rim glasses, handkerchief, suede shoes, and HUGE belly! Ha ha!Try not to embarrass the other guests will you…..thanks.

You live deep within your f.u.c.ked up mind, don’t you.

The evil in women’s hearts leaves them no moral bounds as to inhibit them from descending to the lowest levels of darkness to acquire their self entitled desires.

[iMickey503Participant 12465]

Branched off wrote:

Keep practising and when you are published I will buy a copy of your book, if you will sign it for me.

And I will be first in line for that book. DO it brother. My bookshelf needs some books that are worth reading. And I bet it would gander some attention.

With the kind of swill we have today in the ecosystem, this would be a welcomed addition to any Library. No paperback crap. I want something that is as original as you are.

I’m thinking instead of leather, we use a Glass shattered in thick plastic binding with Dark African wood backing. Paper is going to have to be the heavy gauge Hemp or recycled divorce papers.

That would make it one of a kind.

You are all alone. If you have been falsely accused of RAPE, DV, PLEASE let all men know about the people who did this. http://register-her.net/web/guest/home

[Colin Combover in a ComaParticipant 5068]

iMickey503 wrote:

Branched off wrote:

Keep practising and when you are published I will buy a copy of your book, if you will sign it for me.

And I will be first in line for that book. DO it brother. My bookshelf needs some books that are worth reading. And I bet it would gander some attention.
With the kind of swill we have today in the ecosystem, this would be a welcomed addition to any Library. No paperback crap. I want something that is as original as you are.
I’m thinking instead of leather, we use a Glass shattered in thick plastic binding with Dark African wood backing. Paper is going to have to be the heavy gauge Hemp or recycled divorce papers.
That would make it one of a kind.

Thanks for the continued praise Mickey!
I hope you are doing alright?
Keep vertical and keep triturating those probation officers Matey!

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