A Short Story.

[HitmanParticipant]

Trisha sat in the drivers seat of the burgundy mini van.
the entire suspension creaked and groaned under her weight.
the kids were off to school,
and now it was HER time.
. Trisha drove to the drive-thru window at the local coffee place.Large coffee and a dozen doughnuts…ALL for her.Next it was back on the road,eating the doughnuts each in practically one bite.
.Next it was on to Taco Bell for the quesadilla breakfast burrito.drive thru of course!..5 should hit the spot . She ordered and drove around to pick up the snack after breakfast.empty food wrapper’s littered the front seat of the mini-van.
.Dress Barn was having a sale! Her husband will be SO pleased she saved some money !!! A very big sales woman asked Trisha her size.She whispered it and a gigantic moo-moo came from the back storage room.”Only have 3 in stock” said the sales woman, Trisha bought them all with her husband’s credit card.
.Leaving the shop, she felt the need for something..but WHAT?..oh, THAT was it.Lunchtime, and Trisha made her way to several food carts..hot-dogs, hamburgers, french fries, pizza,and a chicken and rice dish really made her feel better . at least for now.
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Trisha’s husband couldn’t seem to do anything right. why did she marry him..? Oh well. it was almost time for her favorite soap operas to be on T.V.
..a half gallon of ice cream and a box of tissues later, the show’s came to an end as did her afternoon alone. The kids would be home soon,and so would her idiot husband.
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“Hi Mom we’re home “the children blurted out at her.
‘Honey I’m home ” her husband called to her a half hour later..but Trisha didn’t reply..They were used to it, as it was quite routine for her to take a few valium to “relax” in the afternoon.Leaving the family to take care of themselves..my GOD..hadn’t she done enough for them over the years…?
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as she awoke, she heard the sound of a computer and also video games…sniff sniff..was that PIZZA ??? How DARE they order food without her !!!
Trisha screamed ” What in God’s name are you all eating “…and the silence told her everything she already knew.
an entire pizza sat on the kitchen counter. It was for her.
they knew better than to forget to consider HER needs.
the last time they forgot things really got ugly.
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with the pizza quickly finished, she was STILL HUNGRY !!!
“Goddamnit” she yelled at them,
and she took the keys to the mini-van loudly walking toward the vehicle.
as she cranked over the engine RAGE came over her !..
HARRY YOU PATHETIC EXCUSE FOR A MAN WHY DID’NT YOU FILL UP THE GAS TANK ON MY CAR YOU STUPID PIECE OF S~~~?
and Harry had no answer.
he filled it the day before yesterday, where did all that gasoline go anyway..?
GIVE ME SOME GAS MONEY NOW OR OR ELSE !!!
and the wallet opened up, 50 dollars went in to her hands,
and off to Kentucky Fried Chicken she drove.Straight to the drive through window for a Family Sized bucket..20 pieces of chicken ought to be about right.ALL for her.
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she returned home, the children were sleeping and her idiot husband was getting ready for bed.
.he raised his eyes to greet her,
and as usual she said” DON’T EVEN THINK ABOUT IT “
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the family slept as she watched T.V.and snacked on some toaster strudel.
she had a VERY BUSY day planned for tomorrow.she had a HAIR appointment.
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and so..the life of Trisha was ALL her husband’s fault.
he didn’t make enough money,
he didn’t wear the right clothes,
and HE DIDN’T MAKE HER HAPPY ANYMORE.
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she picked up the phone after scratching herself under one eye…
a voice asked”hello 911 dispatcher..what’s your emergency..?”
and REAL TEARS began to flow down her puffy cheeks as she said…
“he hit me.”
.the police were on the way…and she LAUGHED.
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a short story by your friend hitman..
thought’s on this ?

[bladeParticipant]

That story reflects how so many guys are living like it is just a normal part of life .

F~~~ living like that

THE PLANTATION HAS NOW TURNED INTO THE KILLING FIELDS . WOMAN ARE NOW ROLLING CAMBODIAN STYLE .

[Anonymous 43]

some of it feels familiar…too familiar.

I used to find food wrappers, candy bars, chicken nuggets in the seats, gas station recepts, mc donalds cups she must have packed on 70 pounds or more. receipts for 2 lunches. then come home and accuse me of spending her money on useless s~~~. but she could buy candles, scrapbook s~~~, baskets, pillows, f~~~, she was going to buy a whole f~~~ing scrapbook store a few months before it all went to s~~~.

always grazing on something, fruit, bag of chips, whole thing of oreos constantly nomming on something…guzzling 3 starbux a day. I stopped cleaning out her car. your s~~~ you clean it up

it was always my fault for not putting gas in the car. you drive it, you fill it up. we lived 2 miles from a gas station. do it on your way to work, car took 12 gallons, good for 450 miles. fill the f~~~er every Friday on the way home. how easy is that?

one time she ran our van out of gas. I told her it had a gallon of gas in it, and she wanted to drive 50 miles to a friend’s house. passed the gas station, got on the highway, and clunk.

I got the call she was 30 miles from home, demanding I bring gas. f~~~ it. stopped what I was doing, packed up the kids and got f~~~ing gas. I brought my old friend Mr. Mower gas can, 5 gallons, filled the van. c~~~ never thanked me. didn’t go to the friends house, went home and bitched me out all afternoon why I was irresponsible for not keeping the van filled up. I knew it had a gallon, and I needed it to take the kids a half mile to school and 2 miles to the store. on Monday. it was good for at least 20 miles.

I didn’t ask her why she was up near O’Hare airport, when the friend she was supposed to be visiting lived south of 80. those of you who are from Chicago know what a monumental f~~~ up this is. ummm 20 miles too far east, and 50 miles too far north from where I thought she was going, on a totally wrong expressway. c~~~ had friend who lived up that way…maybe the plan changed, not sure. Her Chad lived south of 80. Who knows what the f~~~ was happening that day.

[Secret Agent MGTOWParticipant 22506]

This ought to be handed out to every groom with the final line:

Now substitute the name “Trish” with your gals’ name, and your name with “Harry”.

Chilling. Good writing works when it’s believable. Damn.

Women want everything, but want responsibility and accountability for nothing.

[AutoliteParticipant]

Hitman wrote:

a short story by your friend hitman..
thought’s on this ?

I’d copyright it and see if you can get someone interested into making it into a movie. Tarantino could probably spice it up a bit for the big screen…

[John Woods 13Participant 2855]

A very nice story indeed Hitman. But I think I read it before. If I recall corectly, it was inspired by real events. About 100 MILLION real events, at least. Was it not?

The answer is NO. “I could but I won’t”. Memini murum!

[HitmanParticipant]

John Woods 13 wrote:

it was inspired by real events. About 100 MILLION real events, at least. Was it not?

it was.
at first i was just going to have fun detailing some FAT woman’s day.
fat women really disgust me.
no self control.
and selfish beyond description.
i WAS going to mention the sweat ..fermenting between the folds of FAT,
stinging the air with a high pitched foul smell..
like that of a rotting rodent..
but i refrained.
then it started going towards a point.
and it really went to the end fast.
she cries real tears then laughs..
the INSANITY of women illustrated.
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AWALT !!!
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i felt creative this fine evening..
wanted to share .

[John Woods 13Participant 2855]

Hitman wrote:

i felt creative this fine evening..
wanted to share .

You see, who says MGTOW are just STEM geeks.
I beg to differ. I say we are Renaissance Men.
And I’m also working of a fable, with a related topic. Hope to finish it and post it soon.

The answer is NO. “I could but I won’t”. Memini murum!

[HitmanParticipant]

John Woods 13 wrote:

I say we are Renaissance Men.

i agree.
we are.
new thinking for a new age.
the time is always now.
and i am always on time .
looking forward to your writing good sir.

[CarnageParticipant 22113]

Runnnnnn

To those following me, be careful, I just farted. Men those beans are killers.

[Max PowerParticipant 2721]

I f~~~in’ loved that story, man! I love horror stories and it was truly horrifying. So real it sent chills up my spine – the best horror is the stuff you know really happens.

So terrible that c~~~s like her exist en mass (pun intended) along with the corrupt system that allows them to destroy men’s and children’s lives.

More please!

[Chase PesosParticipant 2136]

I cringed in horror noting the reality of this.

Chase a check, never chase a chick...

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